Tuesday, August 16, 2011
My sentimental Pigeon poem would you please comment on this one thank you?
When I have known an animal and I include birds, reptiles as well as dogs and cats, and then I lose them, I find it devastating and your poem captures that feeling of loss of something that was good and is now gone forever. And animals grieve too, I am certain of that, 'the pigeons come back' 'As if they're saying/I miss you too.' But the first part of the poem hides and reveals something else, someone else, 'those big clumsy hands' and then, 'now coldness draws my feelings', there are some lovely touches in this one. Over the last few weeks you have produced some amazing stuff. I know that you belittle your own poetry but with those two romantic poems, then the farmer one, and now this, these cannot be put down. You must believe in your own writing because with what is inside of you and with confidence in your ability you can achieve even greater heights. Beautiful poem, Caz, I am not saying that in a patronising way, this is top stuff with great lines and above all, wonderful emotions that I can relate to.
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